Separate names with a comma.
Fawn: *Dying*
Sandy: *Busy* Dawn: *Deceased* Marisol: *Planning a funeral*
Melodie: *Plays her violin*
Ari
Make sure you use quotation marks and commas, and there are just a few grammar issues.
Buy a writing kit. I did
Emmett: =.=
Fawn: *Rubs her arms, quietly deceasing*
Hehe, Hey Seth, Lily wont be on, EVER. Just PM me, I'll take her place.
xP Vodka!
(:T She's not coming back, ever.)
Melodie: *Walks around peacefully*
Seems legit, only a few errors.
Yes. Now can you PM me?
Dude, I have no idea what you're talking about, nor do I care. (: You started all this shit upon yourself.
What the hell are you talking about? I haven't even finished middle school, dumbass. And I'm not being religious. .-.
Melodie: *Goes back to work, clearing her mind*
Fawn: *Rubs her neck, worried and tapping her foot*