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Emilia: *Pokes out of the tree, taking her hat off and jumps down, bowing slightly* I'm sorry..
It's a perfect update, I don't see anything wrong with it.
(: Update please!
Melodie: Sweeny! Don't you dare! *Grabbing a branch, swings up and grabbing his hands*
Sandy: Ima sleep.
(Star bro!) Emilia: Shhh!
Melodie: Nellie?... *Looks up at the tree* Emilia: *Throwing another one, ducks back*
Sandy: I'm so tired nowadays...
Emilia: *Picking up a stone with her pink spheres, throwing it over Miranda's head*
Melodie: *Runs out of the house, back in the woods to find Nellie* Nellie!
Melodie: Gah! Where is she?! Emilia:
Melodie: *Opens the stone door* Nellie?
Melodie: *Walking around a couple of trees, hopping over a tree stump*
Melodie: Yes we shall.
Emilia: *Hides in a tree, watching them*
Melodie: I had sent Nellie to my house, I didn't like her being in the forest alone..
Emilia: *Cocking her head to the side, watching Miranda and Leo*
Melodie: *Pulls him a bit closer, kissing him* And I could Care less about the people you killed..
Sandy: I dunno.
Emilia: *Blocks her face with her hands* D-Don't hurt me! DX