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Kesi sent a fireball at May "he said stop." She growls, stepping away from the tree.
Kesi whistles as the pillar of smoke from the tree rises. Her tune gets carried by the wind as she continues whistling, softly and hauntingly.
Kesi laughs as the whole tree burns while she leans on it.
Kesi let the flames from the tree engulf her body, so it sits flickering on her skin. She whistles softly, letting her voice carry in the wind.
Kesi scoffed and walked away from Alice. She flicks her tail and leans against a tree and her tail on fire causes the tree to light up in flames.
Because it's all in one chunk if I focus on it too long I can't read it properly.
Just a tip guys, work on your paragraphs a bit more, after a while when I'm reading I just see black squiggles, so if need be, have a look at...
(Kesi is still stood in front of Alice in demon form, and everyone else has killed a couple of demons and Wes said no to helping Romera and Rebelia)
Kesi flicks her tail and growls "what?"
Kesi wakes up and sniffs the air. Immediately she stands up and shifts into demon form. Wandering into the centre of camp she yells "what in the...
"I… I don't know you…" Kesi lays still, her hair sprawled.
Kesi's eyes widened "not the voices."
Kesi pins back the flap on her tent, and lies on her stomach, resting her head on her forearms, the wind flowing through her hair.
I'm fine thanks ^_^ already read it, I've updated How Do I Say This? Too
As I'm a whoivan, it will probably be related to that (/•^)
I'll start a different one… I'll have to come up with a new idea though…
A/N twelve hours and one and a half paragraphs later I'm finished (/•0) I had to do a few things… So before I get side tracked and have to go to...
Kesi continues singing softly sat in her tent. " Let him know that you know best. Cause after all you do know best. Try to slip past his defense....
"Step one you say we need to talk. He walks you say sit down it's just a talk. He smiles politely back at you. You stare politely right on...