Separate names with a comma.
Melodie: *Licks his chest, meowing*
Melodie: *Her face a deep shade of red,lies against him*
Melodie: *Kisses his forehead*
Melodie: *Panting a bit, tired* S-Sweeny...
Melodie: *Breatheless, surprised*
Melodie: *Kisses his neck gently* Whenever you want to start...
Melodie: *Licks his neck* Got a clue yet?...
Melodie: *Climbs on him, over him* Hello there.. *Growls playfully*
Melodie: *Purrs, turning around and pushing him down on the bed*
Melodie: Teehee, where are you? *Covers her eyes, sticking her tongue out*
Melodie: Oh Sweeny!~ *Hollers*
Melodie: *Meows, licking her hand*
Melodie: *Meows*
Very interesting!
(Already did. :D)
Try commas and punctuation in sentences. :P But it's lovely!
Melodie: *Smirks, hanging off the side*
Melodie: *Snickers* Come and catch me. *Giggles, dissapearing and hanging off the side of her bed*
IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL
Melodie: You'll get it later.. *Kisses him softly*