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Melodie: *Sings a dark chant*
Delilah: *Turns a bright shade of red, jumping and starts to run*
Same.
Melodie: *Plays with her needles*
0.0 Don't have a heart attack. Capitalize in dialogue. :3
Delilah: I love it here..
Miranda's POV~ My daughter is insane, a very insane child. Jadett is crazy. My brother is the same way. She's absolutely insane, and is still a...
Delilah: *Becoming visible again, holds his hand*
Delilah: *Looks up at him, smiling and whispers* So peaceful...
Emilia: *Purrs*
Delilah: *Closes her eyes, leaning against him* Sh..
Emilia: *Mews louder, moaning*
Emilia: *Surprised by his roughness, mews in his mouth*
Delilah: *Becomes invisible, turning him invisible to see baby deer*
Nice. I'll update soon.
Emilia: *purrs* I love you, Leo...