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Don't you dare use that excuse. Making friends isn't by hiding behind your true self by impersonating a fictional character. It's pathetic. I...
257 points?! D: I'll fight until I get 1000. 8(
I love debating! Unfortunately the club where you discuss about social justice and debate on whether the taxes and crap is fair and shit is only...
;D Well it's true. ._. It was a nickname someone gave me.
Okay. .-.
I'm biting my lips so hard that it's bleeding. All for refraining from ripping your souls apart.
THANK YOU! :0
Bump stands for Bring Up My Post. I'm not ungrateful, but really? I'm not bragging, but my story's on the first page. I'd like some feedback....
Unfortunately all I do is hide inside my room. So... I show little signs of love or gratitude because my mom only sees my face thrice a month, if...
You could also add a few commas into the story. It's good so far.
A reminder. One space after a punctuation mark. E.g: "I like pie. I like unicorns, too." Not: "I like pie.I like unicorns,too."
There are a few grammar mistakes. It would be nice if it was a little more detailed. You could add depth to the character's feelings. You...
Here's feedback. The story's good so far. The updates are kinda short, I can't really understand the story if I'm reading one paragraph every...
You mean the one where there was a woman hitting her crying baby? ;A; Then later in the video she hit him with a pillow? Sigh... Child abuse...
Naruto Naruto Shippuden Kaichou Wa Maid Sama Inu X Boku SS Ouran High School Host Club Chobits Fruit Basket Fairy Tail And a helluva lot more.
*swatter Even my keyboard fails me. ,_,
Eh. Should've brought the fly swatted with me when I had the chance.
Wait.. When's Father's Day again? e.e Oh God. I'll have to save up to buy him a Rolex. e.e
I'm just glad it's not Father's Day. Tch.
Unfortunately my mom's on another business trip, so I won't be able to cook her ramen. Ah well. I'll cook it for myself. But people love it when...