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Jess: -Sighs as it gets caught in tree then walks around-
Jess: -Gets of and goes up to the rent a skateboard guy- hey, is there any chance I can keep this -Passes him some money- Rent skateboard guy:...
Jess: -Tosses a rock into the air tired-
Jess: woah -Nearly falls of but just about stays on- Damn, guess I gotta practice more -Laughs-
Jess: -Tries a flip and smiles- Thanks
Jess: -Goes over a few ramps still getting used to it-
Jess: -Takes a purple and black board and skates over to them grinning-
Jess: -Shrugs- I kinda remember, back in a min -Goes over to the rent a skateboard area-
Jess: -Thinks for a minute and turns to them both-is it something you forget? as I've not skated in nearly two years..
Jess: -Rolls her eyes at Nexus- Someone coulda told me..oh well it was only a fiver -laughs-
Jess: -Pays the guy to get in-
Jess: -Tweets back- *kk* -Then puts away her phone and walks to Rockcity-
Jess: -Laughs a little and tweets back smiling- *Sure* -Notices there's a new kid and tweets him- *Welcome :D*
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Ok, thank you
Could I get some ideas or constructive criticism please?
Really need ideas :/ I know this Is only a paragraph but I'm not to sure what will happen. *********************************************...
Jess: -Drys out and checks her phone and smiles typing back- * Hey and yeah lol*
Jess: -Smiles seeing no one nearby and changes before diving into the lake-
Jess: -Walks to lake-