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Jess: -Frowns watching percyous- Peyton: -Smirks and pushes her against the bed kissing her- Lily: -Watches rolling her eyes-
Jess: -Sits on top of it looking below-
Jess: -Watches Percyous confused and eventually walks over- Captain? Peyton: -Closes the door and turns to her smiling then gently kisses her-...
Jess: -Stabs a nearby zombie and carry's on walking around looking for food-
Lily: -Runs over and tries to pull Colin of him- Peyton: -Smiles and walks to his cabin then holds the door open for Sam-
Peyton: -Holds her hand and walks towards a small cabin next to lake- Jess: -Watches them-
Jess: -Walks towards a building-
(.-. Shush Swag.Lol) Jess: -Perches on a tree branch-
Jess: -Watches her dragon- (Can I change Jess's name?)
(No idea what's going on )
Good but some tips to help: •Make updates longer. •Use full stops. •Use speech marks and a line in between each speech to make it clearer. •Be...
Peyton: -Smiles back- I have an old hut near where we are...It's not huge but it is pretty good...-Winks-
Lots of you will want to yell at this guy..tell it to him on his wall...if no one posts if will die quicker (Yes,I know I'm being hypocritical)
Peyton: -Nods and smiles- I lived here for a while..but it's so quiet, it's enough to drive someone mad living here -Laughs-
Peyton: -Smirks and holds her in his arms then kisses her briefly- We're here.. -Looks at the island in front-
Peyton: -Chuckles and Smiles then kisses her softly-
Jess: -Smiles- That'd be good
Peyton: -Smiles and kisses her forehead- I think you mean you are..
Peyton: -Frowns watching Sam and takes of his jacket then wraps it around her shoulders with a smile- You looked cold... Jess: -Sings drunkenly in...
Jess: -Nods looking around curiously then back at Austin- Yep