Separate names with a comma.
Jess: -Begins to drive- Are we going any where? Or just looking for survivors?
A wild Pikac....(Jks) -------- Lily picked up her school bag before eating a breakfast bar. She shouted a quick goodbye to her family before...
(Can I make a new character?If it fits in with the story?)
Jess: Okay -Steps out and walks to the drivers side- (Np, it's a good story.Pay me back by updating soon then.)
Jess: -Stands back and gasps- Woah, that's cool!How did you do that?! -Looks at it curiously-
Jess: I will if someone takes the turret, there's not too many zombies nearby anyway
Bump,really good.
Jess: -Sees Bryce and walks over- Hey...Is it Bryce? -Smiles slightly wondering if he was the person from the other day-
Jess: -Smirks- hit him and see if he feels pain
Jess: -Sneaks in and practices throwing daggers at a dummy-
Jess: -Slumps back against a wall looking around worriedly-
Jess: -Waits ,standing back a bit-
It's good, just a few improvements: •Spell words fully, don't shorten them. •Use a line for each person speaking to make it clearer. •Add...
Jess: -Rolls her eyes and follows them down the tunnel quietly-
Jess: -Gets out a rope from her backpack and slowly lowers herself down the well-
Jess: -Shrugs- I might as well go down then -Ties her torch round her forehead-
Maybe Dark romance mixed with horror?
Jess: Weird place for a well, but yeah -Points her torch directly into it- It kinda does
Jess: -Turns around seeing Kevin- Yeah?
Jess: -Looks out at the landscape whizzing by-