Separate names with a comma.
Jess: -Laughs- Nah, but you guys can dream -Teases back and looks at Kevin but then draws her gaze away quickly-
My profiles on the second page
Bump!
Jess: -Laughs looking back and Emma and Ryan- You two look...comfy..-Teases Smirking-
Jess: -Walks over to Sophie and smiles- Hi, I'm Jess
It's ok, I don't mind changing mine.
Another Jess I'll change my characters name to Lily, to save confusion.
Maybe has gothic parents?
Jess: -Wakes up and stretches-
Uh I'm confused now if I put my profile thing right. Is flaw a bad thing? Or good...? .-.
Jess: -Curls up against the window snoring softly-
Jess: Christ... -Rolls her eyes and shouts towards them- Shut up! -Drifts off to sleep again-
What grade would you be in if you were 16? Sorry, no idea as in the uk there is no grades...
Jess: -Wakes up heating bullets and glares at Colin then at Ryan- Why did you shoot his bike?!
Jess Summers 16 Nerd Red/brown hair long hair Eye colour; Check picture Friendly, intelligent, sarcastic, funny, geeky, fits in with all social...
Jess: -Falls asleep on the back seat-
Jess: -Walks to the knights training academy and begins to practice with her bow-
It's good but a few tips: •Add punctuation in some parts. •Use capital letters for names. •Add more detail. •Put a new line for each person...
(It sounds good It's just the way some people speak/type on itCool though)
You might want to learn to spell. I have no clue what you just said...