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Diana: your the princess, you can sleep whenever. I'm here to keep you safe...
Diana: -nuzzles her head and sighs/
Diana: -smiles and takes off her armor, pulling you into the soft fabric over my chest- thank you...
Diana: I am supposed to be your protector... Can you promise me that you won't go too far away from me without telling me? -pulls her closer to me/
Diana: -whispering- it'll all be okay, my princess... I'm here now... I will protect you... I couldn't before... I'm so sorry... This is my fault...
Why thank you
Diana: I know, I know it does -pulls her into my arms and cradles her- I know, sweetie...
Diana: -slams the door behind him and hurries to Sam's side- it'll be okay... -strokes her hair- everything will be okay...
Diana: -SeesCaleb drawing a sheet over Sam- what is going on here -hate emanates from my voice- what did you do to her
Diana: -goes to open the door- is everything okay?
Diana: -knocks on her door- Princess?
Well, you have more than me
But I'd like some more opinions, people hardly ever read my stories
Most of the story from now I will continue through the eyes of Prophet
Thanks
It won't be good, but it's right under yours Prophet, the Ruler Please read and tell me what you think
I love your story!! I want to advertise mine but that's a bad fan
And please help me with what I did wrong, and I don't respond to negative criticism
Far into the future, all planets with life have been discovered, and the technology is far beyond what we have now, things that could destroy...
(so it kinda just died, didnt it )