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Kaitlyn: rushes over to the angel boy. Jordan!
Kaitlyn: walks over to him
And walks back out. Ok. Ready.
Kaitlyn: ok fine one sec I have to go to the locker room and change out of my hockey clothes. Changes into this: [img]
Kaitlyn: yay! Thank you! Ok so where are we going?
Kaitlyn: bites her lip. Can I come?
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Kaitlyn: smiles. Awesome. Where are you going)
This is really very good writing. You are consistent in effort and voice even with these long updates! Very very good work. I look forward to...
Kaitlyn: so. Tell me the truth. Are you ACTUALLY going to help your dad with his car?
Kaitlyn: turns to Robbie. I guess I was wrong.
Kaitlyn: tries to suppress a laugh. Picks up her skates and walks past them
Kaitlyn: overhears them and sighs. Waits for her skates to be done in the lobby
Kaitlyn: yes you are. Cocky and arrogant. Walks back inside past trey into the pro-shop to get her skates donew
Kaitlyn: you boys are all the same. Huffs
Kaitlyn: tell me Robbie!
Kaitlyn: what where you two whispering about back there? Flashes him a smile
Kaitlyn: wheres your buddy trey?
Kaitlyn: hears Robbie. Well hello there