Separate names with a comma.
Kaitlyn: walking through the Forrest
(we have like 3 shapeshifters. Can your change her power?)
Kaityln: KITSUE!! Scoops her up. Are you ok shiloh
/:| this rp is almost dead.
I think this is very good. Good job. 4 and a half stars.
Kaitlyn: taps her foot and pets kitsue
(she's talking to me. ) kaitlyn: reads the note and slips it into her pocket
Vegetarian does NOT mean that you eat animals.
Kaitlyn: listens to the drums from afar
Kaitlyn: closes her eyes. Too loud. Walks back out onstage to listen from a distance.
Kaitlyn: takes kitsue off her head and holds her as she walks backstage.
Kaitlyn: sits on the stage.
Kaitlyn: thank you. I dont think he's here. ()
Bump. Sorry this is just so I can update it tomorrow night.
Kaitlyn: smiles well, I do. Softly sings "Aux Champs-Elyseés"
Lots of grammar stuff actually. Loads.
This is too sequential (first this... Then this.... Then this... And then this) it's like one thing right after another with very little detail....
Kaitlyn: scowls at her. I speak french missy.
Kaitlyn: Kitsue! Laughs. SHILOH!!!!
Kaitlyn: -scolds- don't be mean darling. Shiloh! Shiloh!!