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Kaitlyn: follows her smiling.
Kaitlyn: plays with her.
Kaitlyn: do you mind if I stop by and meet everyone?
Kaitlyn: nothing. Plays with some grass and tickles her nose with it
Kaitlyn: I understand. Smiles. Do you need help?
Kaitlyn: turns around. What?
Kaitlyn: glad to hear it. Smiles.
Kaitlyn: sits in a feild
Kaitlyn: you really don't need I call me miss. Smiles. Let's start over. Hi. I'm kaitlyn. Queen of the elves. And you are? Smiles.
Kaitlyn: walks out.
Kaitlyn: Kitsue? Helps her up. Are you ok?
Watch your grammar girly. Just a few things here and there but grammar is very important. Make sure to re-read every sentence before you post....
Yup!
Spite!
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Kaitlyn: feels like she's being watched. Turns around and sees nobody. Hm.
Kaitlyn: stays silent and puts Kitsue on the floor walking out.
Kaitlyn: looks back at. Lily. To Kitsue- I'm kaitlyn. Queen of the elves. Smiles.
(whatever. I will be talking about you) Kaitlyn: looks at Lily and Kitsue. Umm. Hi. I knew that. You're Kitsue right?
(wasnt talking about you)