Separate names with a comma.
Oh so that makes you entitled to call other people Nazis? YOUR BEING RACIST AGAINST YOURSELF.
(what's happening? Are we talking about killua?)
Kaityln: turns around. I'm yes? Hi.
Kaitlyn: cradling kitsue in her arms.
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OH HELL NO. YOU DID NOT JUST SAY THAT. GRAMMAR IS A VERY IMPORTANT PART OF YOUR LIFE. WITH OUT GRAMMAR YOU SOUND LIKE A TWO YEAR OLD IDIOT LITTLE...
Kaitlyn: sitting in the main building of the angel kingdom.
(no she just leads them. There are no kings or queens. Look at the first page. )
(you have to interact with people. You're making yoursel separate) kaitlyn: smiles and pets Kitsue.
Kaitlyn: in a library.
Kaitlyn: waves to everyone smiling.
spelling Hun. And grammar. Doesn't help to misspell words when your trying to come off as an adult.
Kaitlyn: looks around the house amazed.
GRAMMAR. GRAMMAR. GRAMMAR. capitalize pronouns and the beginnings of sentences. PUNCTUATION! Super important! Commas, periods, question marks and...
Three hors???? Why's an hor?
Kaitlyn: gives a small wave back to the boys as she walks away. Follows Kitsue.
Kaitlyn: ok here goes. In a small green forest far far away lived a little bird called Kuvis. She had bright eyes, small ears and blue feathers....
Kaitlyn: ok let me think.
Kaitlyn: hi boys! It's lovely to meet you! Looks over the gardens and the house.
Kaitlyn: about what?