Separate names with a comma.
(The sheer size and length of this RP scares off most would-be newcomers, thank god xD)
(Rofl, nobody here was experienced in RPs, this was our training grounds xD)
(Rhino) Lauryn: *Watches closely as the student goes deeper, heedless of the many intelligent and unfriendly eyes following her*
(Ikr, I was such a noob when I first joined xD but I miss Lily and Sal, and all the others too)
(What do you mean? O.o) Lauryn: *Notices a student wandering into the forest and she transfigures into a raven, flying up into the air and following*
Lauryn: *Practices various spells out on school grounds*
Lucy: How many are there? Val: I see... I hope we can get word to the other elf-cities before they also are targeted, if this Jack decides to...
Kris: *Laughs* Great! Let's go up to the bell tower *Smiles*
Lucy: I'm with you! *Runs with her bow drawn* Val: Why is he pissed? Were the elves involved somehow?
(Home!)
Also, this isn't an essay. This is a short story.
Number one huge correction you need to take care of: Spaces after punctuation!
(Eating at a family dinner thing... For the third day in a row... >.< I'll talk to you later, when I get some time or when I get home. Till then,...
(Sup? :3)
(Sammeh!)
Val: Jack? Lucy: Orcs... *Checks her bow again before getting ready to fight*
Kris: Good. *Laughs* Otherwise, you'd have to cancel them all. (I has nooooo idea what I should do here xD)
Lucy: What is this feeling? Val: *Also gets dressed* I hope nothing bad has happened...
Kris: Got any Christmas plans? *Smiles*
Val: I can feel it... It feels dark... Lucy: *Looks around*