Separate names with a comma.
(I feel amused. ) Sweeney: Smirks.
Sweeney: Kisses her back, putting hands on her waist. (UGGHHH... I have to shower. Brb.)
Sweeney: Stands next to her. "Hm?"
Sweeney: "No promises..." Nellie: Covered in blood, breathing unevenly, falls against tree, and stabs it.
Sweeney: Smirks. Nellie: Killing animals, and little gnomes, eyes glowing red.
Sweeney: "Can I have my blade back, now?"
Sweeney: Sighs, and slowly climbs back to Melodie. Nellie: Gets up, and runs away, pushing past everything in her way, slicing thick branches...
Sweeney: "Nellie, I'm sorry." Nellie: Turns away. "I forgive you."
This is perfect!! I love it! I can't see anything wrong with it. It has a great plot.
Sweeney: "Fine..." Goes to find her. Nellie: Sitting at trunk of tree, weeping.
Sweeney: "Why should I?"
Nellie: Looks sadly at Sweeney, and jumps through the trees.
Nellie: Waves down to her. Sweeney: Takes Nellie's neck. "I don't need you, anymore." Puts razor to her neck. Nellie: Closes eyes slightly,...
Nellie: Hears Melodie and climbs tree. Sweeney: Already in tree. "Nice try."
Sweeney: Sighs.
*Nellie isn't there* Sweeney: "Of course...."
Sweeney: Follows close behind.
Sweeney: "Lead the way..."
Sweeney: "Shall we go?"
Sweeney: Kisses her back. "I'm glad.... Speaking of killing, where's Nellie?"