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Minnie: *doesn't hear anyone or anything, just starting at the house in shock*
Minnie: *looks around in awe, eyes wide, her mouth open slightly*
Minnie: *walks inside, murmuring* I hope he's okay with me popping in like this...
Minnie: *approaches Daryl's house and stops, staring at it* Oh my gosh...
Minnie: *pulls her book away from her chest and starts reading as she walks, glancing up time to time*
Minnie: *hears something and pauses, listening, before continuing to walk*
Minnie: *hugs her book to her chest, looking down at the sidewalk*
Minnie: *shrugs and stands* I guess I could hang out at Daryl's for an hour or two... And I can always text Jack where I am... *grabs her book,...
Minnie: *sits in her room reading and waiting*
Minnie: *arrives at home and waits*
Minnie: *mumbles* Maybe I should go home to look better... *stands and starts walking home*
Minnie: *gets up and rushes to the front of the school to wait for Jack*
Minnie: I pinky promised Jack!
Minnie: I'm heading to the book store as soon school ends. Thank goodness for the snow.
Minnie: I might be at the book store all night. I really love books, and I don't have to pay for them. So, yeah, I'ma be there for a while.
Minnie: That's a bit of a problem, since Jack said he's taking me to the book store and buying me all the books I want. I'll be there for a while.
Minnie: *nods* Yep. And Snow, I'm horrible at math.
Minnie: I'll go if Jack does. And besides, what else do I have to do?
Minnie: *nods* Yeah, as he was running away, he must have saw me crying and then he ran after me. He wouldn't leave my house until he gave back my...
Minnie: That's nice. *looks down at her book and sets it down gently* He stole my book last night, that's how we met.