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Heey! I changed my name i dont know no... what do you think?
I really like it but you should try to add a bit of action in the beginning, to keep people reading and interested not trying to dampen your...
Katelyns pov I watch William walk away and my hatred for him burned. I couldn't take this to the police, this was personal. Nothing in jail could...
But my story would probably be much shorter, party, but ill keep that in mind
Williams pov I sat at home, researching who Katelyns friend is on the school website. If Katelyn has any friends, they must be from school. I...
I groan as my head its something hard and i slowly open my eyes. I see people staring down at me, including my parents, Nick, and a doctor....
Katelyns pov I see William, creeping in the shadows with a big smile on his face, and i knew, i knew he killed them. I keep staring until the...
Williams pov I watched as Katelyn got into the police car, a smile on my face. I wasnt sure what her reaction would be hut i was pretty...
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Sorry! Really long words... Just kept coming to me!
Katelyns pov I was downstairs reading a magazine when i heard the door open from upstairs. I frown and put my magazine down, "Hello?" i call out....
Haha
Damn, i meant knives, not swords!
William pov I stare at my phone. This was the first time someone has ever turned me down. I whipped my phone against the wall in anger and heard...
Katelyns pov "how does 7 pm sound?" Williams voice came from the machine. I squealed and called him back. "Hello?" he answered. "hello! Its...
Ill update soon ^.^
William - flashback age 6 "Daddy! Please stop it!" I cried as i grabbed hold of his arm as he brought it back to hit mommy again. He whirled and...
Williams pov I frowned as a blood stain wouldnt wash out of my shirt as i scrubbed it in the sink. I look down the hall to see the body of Emma...
Is it good so far?
Whoops *i was soon falling asleep