Separate names with a comma.
>.> i think everybody does this as a hobby, or people would be selling their stories as books <.< if they did this professionally
*ahead Sorry! Im a nuisance
Also my story, say sexy much? you can see how drastically my writing changed when i listened to peoples thoughts and it looks waay better at...
Emma's pov I hear sirens wail in my dazed position. I moan and feel myself get picked up and gently put down. I look to my side and see two...
You can use our advice to help your storys, just dont take it personally
Ok! We are just trying to help you get better techniques to write more 'professional' By the way, when somebody thinks, there isn't any "s,...
I agree oreo
More detail! Try to describe the characters more! Also space more often, it makes it look less sloppy, i learned that the hard way also. Also...
I'll update soon
What do you think of the not yet over, almost ending?
ཐི།ཾཋྀ Got it!
While waiting, you guys should read my other fan fic, say sexy much? if you havent already!
(not over yet!)
Katelyns pov I groan, rolling over, feeling the pain burst all over. I opened my eyes and find myself still on the dock, the sun shining. I...
I hear everyone shout in suprise. "Whats going on, doctor?" my mom asked. "its probably just a power outage, we get them sometimes." the doctor...
ཐི།ཋྀ how do you get that little dot?
again, i cant write, family came over
Haha i just realized their names all with A's
Allyson Hannigan, Adam Sandler, Amber Benson
8.999 ^.^