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Lani Raven Goes by both Lani and Raven Hench(wo)man Looks: Google image search "Chihiro Persona 3" She's quite cunning and clever. Also...
Lucy: I'm good, just a bit... Overwhelmed.
Lucy: Any reason why?
Um, he was giving you good feedback. You need to create paragraphs, work on spacing and punctuation.
Lucy: Hm? A bad feeling? Like what?
Lucy: Yeah, I don't really know why... (I wouldn't, but maybe someone else would, lol)
I reserve one slot as a friend, and one as a henchman. I'll apply in a bit
Original, at least I think so.
(Okay :3)
(Who are Jack and Dev, and where are they?)
(Anyone wanna talk or do something with Lucy)
Rei: Interesting... What do you do now?
Lucy: *Sees the others* I see I'm not the only one that can't sleep...
Lucy: *Heads down and looks for something to drink*
Lucy: *Gets up silently and sneaks out*
Rei: Oh?
Rei: You read often?
Rei: *Keeps knitting*
Rei: Indeed...
Rei: *Notices the book he's reading and continues knitting*