Separate names with a comma.
(Everyone can join, just please place your character profile as shown on the first page. )
(I'll place skeleton in a sec. Save Ring of swift water for me )
Jen needs to update.
Bump!!
Bump! Please space out your paragraphs sugar
Jen update
Space out the paragraphs a bit. Then update
Update!!
Mel should update soon ^.^
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Chloe if you have a problem. It's called pm, stop trying to argue with me on someone's thread. I was giving advice, and you haven't exactly given...
The last chapter by the way. Is much better than the previous ones.
Don't snap at readers for feed back. If you can't take even a little advice or criticism. Then your not ready to start writing for people to see....
Uh....fix your grammar mistakes. Actually use sentences for every thing and not use text talk. It honestly looks like a nine year old is writing this.
Chapter 18 " Fallen friends " Segaru groaned as he picked himself up off the ground. The grass beneath him soiled with blood and sweat. He...
Gina sat under a tree just outside the school music room. She had slipped her head phones out of her book bag. Fiddling with the cord while...
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Bump Great update!
I would suggest you placing this in a more professional manner. Decorate it abit before posting.