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I stopped running as I got out of breath. I mustve been walking for a at least 45 minutes. Was I going in the right direction? Was I lost? I...
I grabbed the first taxi I saw, "21 Park Avenue please." I said to the taxi driver. "sure thing." he replied happily. He was a large man, and...
I shall
Ethan nothing can be too dramatic! AMAZING story! I absolutely love it!
haha I know..well I didn't like it anyway
Firstly if you don't like Pedos..then don't read a f*cking pedo story!! and secondly it's only a story..calm down dude
haha, it would though!
Amazing as always! BUMP
Dom took me to a restaurant..i couldn't afford to pee in a place like this let alone eat there! "Dom...I can't...I've got not enough cash." I...
Aww I love how you are getting into this story! And don't worry..she hasn't cheated on him...and she won't..consciously
His eyes wandered around our appartement..it was in a bit of a state.. Wait who's boxers were those? Must be Leo's...I quickly ran over and...
Please carry on with Father Dearest! And this
Bump!!!
Awww BUMPDATE
Wow. Such a strong and powerful beginning. It really hooked me in! And I love how you descries the two girls in lots of detail before saying...
Ok, I'll update tonight
Only if you update now
I just read this whole story! OMG INCREDIBLE but I agree with can't remember who said..I prefered it at th beginning but it's still unbelievably...
What?! I'm the biggest fan! I'm impatiently waiting for the update!
No critisicm!:D