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At the hospital, we were told to wait in the waiting room. We waited, and we waited, until a nurse came up to talk to us. She told us that Ivery...
What do you mean by no, I demanded. "I don't know why, but we are like this for some reason, and we shouldn't try to change it." Now I was really...
We have already gone over this...it doesn't matter what you think, it's her story, and she like it the way it is. I think it's a much better story...
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I appritiate the tip! Chloe is a 6th grader too, and she is even better than me...unbelievable right?!
Um...ya what ultraviolet said
Sorry...I'm only in 6th grade, and my teachers never really taught me how to punctuate dialog. As for spelling, well...I'm not the best speller....
I can tell that this is going to be really good!
Omg I can't believe this...I forgot to mention that the main charecter's name is Hope!
I got home from school, and when I saw the ambulence, I ran in the house. I saw my mom, and her eyes were puffy and red, and her nose was runny. I...
Bump! I love this story so much!
Oops...that was supposed to be after hill
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