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Kassie: -Smiles back- You're very welcome daddy Annabelle: I don't know who you are, so I'm not telling you my name
Kassie: -Smiles and kisses his forehead- Daddy has the prettiest fur in the world
Kassie: -Nods, completely mesmerised by the way the light reflects off of his fur- I love it, it's so beautiful Annabelle: Why should I tell you?!
Sam: Okay...
Kassie: -Climbs onto his back-
Sam: Ok... Annabelle: -Winces and turns back normal-
Annabelle: I don't know why I was following you, I just was! -Turns invisible and starts to creep away- Sam: -Shrugs- We don't have to have hydra...
Kassie: Pwease can you shift into wolf? Annabelle: What was that for?!
Kassie: -Cuddles him- Daddy?
Sam: I can cook if you want Annabelle: -Dodges it- Hey! Kassie: -Giggles and licks back-
Annabelle: -Shrugs- I'm a vampire stupid Kassie: -Rests my head on his head- Hewwo Sam: -Appears beside Zane- You should've gotten me to help
Annabelle: Make me Kassie: -Hugs him-
Annabelle: Tough -Pulls away from him-
Annabelle: W-who wants to know?
Annabelle: -Freezes-
It's a good start, try make the updates longer though and add more emotions, thoughts and senses
Wow!
Sam: -Goes up to the surface and walks behind Sayuli- Annabelle: -Sleeping in a tree-
(Accepted) Sam: -Sighs and goes to my room- Why did you let him do this to you? -Talks to myself-
Sam: -Shakes head and looks down, thinking to myself- What happened to you Samie?