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Max: There's nothing to do here.. -listens to people talking, chuckling at their accents, wondering If they think hers is funny-
Awesome!! Thanks for the advice and nice comments! I'll update it in a little while.. :)
Max: -sitting in the kitchen, eating a burrito- Jake: -playing his Playstation in his bedroom-
Yes this is a love story, no it's not right off the bat lovey dovey.. I am putting action into it, don't worry.. Also, there will be things you...
Max: -walks around to the side of the building, makes sure no one is watching, then jumps, going higher than a normal human and grabbing the edge...
Max: -sits outside, eating the sandwich slowly-
Max: Hi..
Max: -watches Akiko, smile growing-
Max: -smiles slightly at Akiko, wondering how she got into this horrible place-
(Okay.. Thanks.. :) He is now 16 and looks like this. [img] Sorry, I like pictures.. XD Max usually dresses kind of like this, and this is what...
Max: -shrugs- I can throw a punch.. But take that catgirl for example, what's her name? She seems.. Soft, vulnerable.. It's not a good place for...
(Can I change something about Jake? Like maybe his appearance and age?)
Max: You too.. This place doesn't seem like a good place for softies.. Reminds me of something like juvy. Not that I've ever been there.. -looks down-
Jake: -in the bathroom tending to his broken nose-
Max: -nods- Cool name.. I'm Max.
Max: -chuckles- Smart choice.. -smiles, which for her is a half smile-
Jake: -scowls at Max and Grey, then walks off-
Max: Thanks.. Been practicing that one for a while..
Max: -turns to Grey- Hey.. You don't want that do you? -gestures to Jake, winks sarcastically-
Jake: ****!! What the ****?! -holds his nose, which is gushing blood-