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:) it's a really short story but a really great excerpt!! :D
Wow what a unique way to meet the love of your life! XD you should update again soon!!! (even though you just did) :D I'll be a lurker reader...
It is a bit cliche, but every story is different. Criticism is good, and those things are true. However, I think your writing is good and you use...
I dare you to bumpily bump the bumpish bumpies XD update soon!! :)
:) bump bump bump bump This is really interesting and I can't wait footy the next update :D Was there a sorry before this??
That's really sad that all these things happened to you! I'm really sorry :,( Is that the end, though? What happened in the mental hospital? And...
The power of music and love combined?!? BUMP
So I just wanted to say this story is really original!! :D also, I love that you use paragraphs and dialogue correctly!! XD I hate it when there...
This is an interesting story. Its a little predictable, but its good :) I only wish you would update more often with longer posts XD BUMP
I really like it. XD BUMP
That was a really interesting idea about the dream thing :) Good job!!!! .... Omg WHY did they name the kid Charlotte?? X,D
So this is the first pedo story I've ever read.... And I'm addicted to it!!!! BUMP
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Bumpity bump Bummp :)
:O bump!! What will happen next XD
Bump!!!! :)