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(It's a video game sweetie) -I smile at Myles taking the bag- "Thank you."
-I chuckle- "Not when you don't like attention."
-I smile- "I prefer it that way. Being king draws too much attention."
"Even if it's just us, what matters is us being married." -I place a grape between my lips and pass it to her with a kiss-
-I smile holding another grape for her- "Done. The invitations are up to you however. I don't have anyone to invite."
-I smile looking into her eyes, taking out a bag of grapes.- "Anytime you want." -I place a grape at her lips-
-I chuckle, fixing it, taking a bite from the apple- "Thank you sweetie."
-Chuckles- "Well for one they aren't supposed to come out."
-I grin and flick my wrists, two blades shooting out from my gauntlets- "I got an upgrade."
(accepted) -I smile sitting beside Alida-
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-I laugh mouthing out the word- "Da...Da...."
-I smile- "Can you say Da-da?"
-I chuckle watching him-
-I chuckle and take a rattle from my pouch, offering it to him- "Look what I picked up for you in town today Eli."
(It's alright. It didn't offend me. I just found it annoying after the first few times) -I smile and take Elijah from Myles, cradling him in my arms-