Separate names with a comma.
-I crawl out of the cave, rising to my feet- "New York. And then to England."
-I gently shake Alida awake- "Time to go."
-I sit in the cave, having stayed awake all night.-
-Takes the apple still blushing- "Thank you..."
-Blushes at Kats words- "W...were not..."
"Thank you again..."
-I lean back against the cave wall and sigh-
(Stop getting into other peoples business ignoring you now)
(What part of jacket stops it from dripping don't you understand? also butting in is rude)
-I grit my teeth in pain- "Thank you..." -I blink and glance at Saylie- "This is my cave. Find your own spot."
(What part of jacket soaks up blood don't you understand? )
(what part of hidden cave is hard to understand?) -I flinch in pain- "Could you...?"
"I would if I could get the bullet out..." -I look at my shoulder sadly, remembering my family-
-I move my hand to reveal it- "Gunshot..."
-I lower the arrow, holding my shoulder again- "Thank you..."
-ignores Kat, not liking all the people around- "Sal..." (you know the cave is hidden right?)
-I hold the arrow like a dagger- "Who are you?"
-I blink and scurry to the other side, watching her carefully-
-Takes an arrow, gritting my teeth as i try and dig the bullet out-
-I clench my shoulder, taking my jacket off to look at the wound-