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-Smile, resting my chin on her head, taking in the scent of her vanilla shampoo- "And I am the happiest guy in the world."
-I laugh at her reaction- "This makes me overjoyed seeing you this happy."
-I rise and slip the ring on her finger, wrapping my arms around her in joy.-
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-I give a quick nod to Sammie, telling her to go, before turning back to Alida and rising slowly to my feet.- "Yes. I came here today to tell you...
-I turn back to Alida, relaxing, and smiling- "Yes I did..."
-I glance and Sammie and tense up, wondering if she's an enemy of the Willows and knows I'm one-
-I chuckle- "I came to see you." -I shift position on the railing- "I watched you pick the petals off the previous flower. The flower lied to...
-I smile and speak softly- "The flower lied to you..."
-I smile and sit gently on the railing, curiously watching her-
-I mentally smack myself- "What am I doing? I'm a wizard, I can bloody teleport." -I reach into my mind, tapping into the vast energy source,...
-I slowly begin making my way to the Diamond castle, keeping my eyes and ears sharp for anything-
: Salrion Willow (Goes by Salrion Grayson) : 17 : [img] : Cool, calm, quiet, relaxed, very clever, upbeat. : Willow No enemy Alida Salrion...
-I sit by a small stream, talking with Alida- "So where do we go next my love?"
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-I snap my fingers and teleport us 5 miles away, using all my energy. I hold myself up on her- "There you are."
-I gently pull her back into my arms- "We have plenty of time....Who knows what tomorrow will bring. I want this moment. Here and now, to be in...
-I wrap my arms around her and press my lips to hers lovingly-