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Snow:-sighs and pulls back a frowning Scarlet- Scar.. Don't make a bad impression already...... Scarlet: He was in-.. Snow:-cuts scar off and...
(Omg my baby will turn evil......... It can grow up to be a key member in the Xion or Nephil and then help destroy It's mothers group...
Scarlet: Yes my bubble, my personal bubble please don't pop it Kay -smiles with a false sweetness-
You got some typos... Make sure to get those, defentily be more descriptive and describe situations... This town is a very interesting place...
Snow: Why would it be my demise?
Scarlet:-stares at Diego with a raised eyebrow- Bubble Snow:-rubs arms slightly- Um why is everyone so touchy here? Scarlet: No freakin idea...
Snow:-accepts the hug but then shys away after and hides slightly behind Scarlet- Scarlet:-bristles and steps more in front of Snow- No hugging...
Prince Ian though I'm team Van...... Agh maybe then Van..... Wait no Ian's been stood up so many times it stinks.....so prince Ian...
(Hmm can I be extra magical and time skip with the kid..... Nahh... Things are happening with other people I guess *sighs* oh well haha)
(I know.....)
Scarlet:-mumbles and smiles in her sleep- (It's a magical Baby I now what's real okay I'm just so tired with nothing happening with this...
Bump
Nope no killing I'm so sorry for the long wait but I have terrible writers block and my wo if was out yester day sooooo my update may have been...
Lilly: serious power comes at a cost and this is just a secret sooo -sits down grinning again- tell me of the show
Lilly:-thinks and then twists hand making a growling red gem appear- here shiny and power it helps improve ones natural strengths under the moon...
Lilly: What do you consider valuable?
Lilly:-perks up- busy with what? A show? Of do tell -steps again blocking your path grinning, excited at the thought of a human being tortured-
Scarlet: Good to be here Snow:-nods silently-
Lilly:-appears before Jack- Yes, all of them
Lilly:-appears behind Jack and whacks him on the head then vanishes- hehehehehe