Separate names with a comma.
Snow:-in the lab looking at some evidence calmly running it through the program- Scarlet:-appears at hq and yawns with a bored expression...
Lilly:-smirks- So should I name you then
Lilly:-smirks- well rest up then you start in the morning.... -pauses- whats your name?
Ahhhhhhhh amazin im in love
hmm okay nice but longer updates paragraphs describe things
Snow:-nods and gets out of the car looking around-
Snow:-is quiet holding her knife to her closley staring out the window- Do you think they will be okay?.........
Snow:-looks at the knife- um i dont Know...
Snow:-finishes and then closes the flame sighing- Yea? -turns to jack-
Snow:-nods and heads for the kitchen grabbing it and comng back- Okay hold still...... -raises the flame to his wounds which are cleaned from the...
Sjow:-comes closer and lokks around- does anyone have a lighter? To close it with out infection you should put it under a flame... weld thebwong...
i shall update son but my writing app which i use us experincing difficultys........ Im so sorry it should be up by monday and i'll update then...
Snow-:peeks out and sees the guys arm cut off- oh my..... -gulps scared-
Snow:-nods and looks around- Wheres the door?
Snow: Thanks... -looks around and then glares getting up on my feet suddenly- Wheres my knife?! Did the guy who knocked me out take it!
Snow:-nods again stil confused- im um Snow
Snow:-nods slowly and tries to sit up suddenly remembering my head getting Bashed with something by someone- Why am I here? Who are you? Why did...
GREAT SCOTT GOOGLY MOOGLY
Snow:-murmers opening her eyes- wwhere am I?
Minor spelling haha weight not wait but I love it really great job