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Jack: "Perfect." He says, continuing to walk.
(Scratch) Jack: Pockets money. "Drink time?"
Jack: Looks at Jess. "Whatcha doing?"
Jack: He leans against the shack, looking back and forth.
Jack: "What merchandise are we exactly delivering?"
(They're not that hard to contact, and they can't really just say "no I don't like Fan Fiction.")
Jack: "I'm still in need of a drink." He laughs.
(Contact a mod.)
Jack: "Well then..."
Jack: "You know this person, Cap'n?"
Jack: Behind John. "Don't talk to the beggar. They'll just boter you all day."
Jack: He takes an apple, not noticing Snow.
Jack: "Alright then." He says walking behind him.
Jack: Puts out a hand. "Jack. And you?"
Jack: Jumps after John, falling and hanging onto the harbor. "Little help?"
Jack: Sits up. "Well what are we waiting for?" He laughs.
Jack: "You kidding. I'm gonna stick here for awhile." He says, napping.
Jack: He pockets the money and grabs a sword, and a flintlock pistol.
Jack: "Well here I am."
Jack: "With somebody kidnapping people? I'll actually pass."