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(Could I be a princess?)
Chris: and how would she prevent it?
Chris:-growls and throws him against a tree- and why not?
Chris:ill get everyone. You just wait mutt.
(I have to go for a bit ill be back soon.)
Chris:-grunts then hits him o the side of his face and growls- that's not near as worse as what I'm going to do to you. And soon you and your pip...
Chris:-smirks- who me? I didn't do anything.
(I accepted you I think.)
Chris:-growls- you and your little pip has a mouth... Better shut it before anything happens
Chris:it's my job to collect all you escapees. -growls- and I'm not a mutt.
Chris: I don't think you should.
I think it's a pretty good start. Update and also love how you described what she looked like and your just describing things lol.
Tell me then how long have you been here? For your info I am experienced and know how to write stories and make good rps. This seriously gets me...
Chris:-grabs mocks shoulder- what do you think your doing?
Chris:-glares as grabs her, stands up still has a tight grip on her-
Chi:ohk -smiles- ill look after you! Chris:I'm not answering anything. Annabelle:-sees mock go by-
Chris:-glares at her- your not in the right position to be acting all sassy.
Chi:-smiles- true.
Anna:-walking around-
Chris:sweetheart think of this as a permanent vacation you get to go to the school with all the scientist! Wouldn't that e fun? -smirks-