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I groaned quietly in reluctance, quiet enough not to be heard, and did as he said, I shoved the wood into the old rusted fire place sitting a few...
Emma's POV "So who was that guy you were with?" Salrion asked wrapping a arm around my waist, walking me to his car. I looked at Salrion,...
Dianna: *looking for her brother*
Alida: *riding her horse into town*
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"Umm not to sound rude or anything… but kill her already, what the hell are you waiting for!" Slay yelled, spraying spit as he did so. The big...
Dianna: *sitting on the fountain, thinking*
I slowly walked Emma out of the school, smirking to myself. Those cops were completely clueless as to who could killed that teacher. Little did...
Dianna: *in her dress and crown, skipping around*
Alida: are you ok? *watches her*
Like I thought, someone had called the police. I watched through the window with my own private smirk. "What is happening?" Emma asked looking...
Alida: *sitting up on horse*
Dianna: *sits down, playing her mini piano*
(ok :( c ya)
(ugh I don't feel so good )
Dianna: *waves out the window, gets in bed, writes in her diary*
(hey guys if ur stomach pains really bad, and it feels like ur going to puke.. Is that bad..? )