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() Dianna: I wanna harder target. *shoots*
Dianna: *smiles doing as he says and shoots, hitting the mark better* maybe your better then Sal.. I don't know.. He never showed me how to do...
( creeps) Dianna: *shrugs, sulking*
and I'll add ur character in the next chapter
Emma's pov As we walked into the small little diner I smiled as Lilly came rushing over to me, embracing me in a big hug. "Oh Em. Im so glad...
Of course you can add a character
Dianna: *in the court yard, practicing her shot*
Alida: *in her garden*
(but not completely right about the other stuff )
( ur good that was all right! Half demon, half devil)
Can I be the angel?
Dianna: deal, I accept then! *giggles* (now I'm off to bed lol)
(I'm going to bed see ya guys )
Dianna: no give you makeovers. *pokes Sal* but I do want a older sister. *nods*
Dianna: *nods thinking*
Alida: *sitting in her bed, watching far in the distance*
Dianna: *slowly smiles again, looking at him both*
Dianna: what? *mutters*
Dianna: *mutters sad words in her pillow*