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-as I come to the end of the hall I see another door, I open it slowly- ( lol suspense )
-I smile back then start to run still holding takons hand-
-I grab takons hand n pull my self up-
-I fall off the window seal landing with a thud- crap that hurt -walks out of room down the hallway-
Ok -hangs up, sits out side my house in the shadows so my mom doesn't see me-
( look on p.375 2 posts above your poem )
( I ran up like 10566 steps )
( in a secret room ) -sit on the window seal n think about stuff-
Umm yea I guess -wipes tears from eyes- where are you?-
-I pick up- hey -I mange to say crying-
-I see a door an open it, I see a round room with white walls with blue flowers, there's a big bed it the center and a large window overlooking...
( I ment Takon my autocorrect changed it Lol)
-I pick up my phone crying- hi Tony
-she tells me I should just leave and I'm a disgrace, I start to cry as she breaks my door open n slaps me across the face. I grab my bag n run...
-I walk down the dark hallway-
-she continues to yell at me about how I don't spend enough time with her and how I should be more like my sister-
-I keep running- 10654, 10655 -I reach the top-
-I lay down on my bed n become even more mad as my mom pounds on my locked door yelling at me to open it-
Sure
433,434,435,436 -I stop to take a breath-