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(Wow, we hit stage four and this RP just dies... Pull it together, guys!)
(Dunno, Angies not usually on till 2300 English time... Midnight for me )
Yeah, nice plot idea, I'd like to see more.
Shadow: *Replies* Good, meet me on the west entrance of town. Don't let yourself be seen.
(Oh sh¡t, she won't be home from school in time... )
Ummm, to be honest, I only have a few gripes (Lily: Oh boy, here it comes ), and that's 1) work on punctuation like commas and such, it gives...
(Lol, Kris ain't gonna do much till I'm done with homework... I'm too busy to be dual RP-ing... )
Shadow: Creepers? Right... Hopefully she'll last the entire op...
Shadow: Tranquilizers, grappling hooks, all the standard equipment, and bring some bugs. I'd like to keep an eye or four on these guys......
Kris: **
Shadow: Right...
Shadow: I think I have an idea as to why the White House and Kremlin want this gem so badly... I have a new mark, but it's a two-man job... I'm...
Kris: *Stays asleep*
Kris: *Lays down next to her and falls asleep, stroking her hair*
Shadow: Well now, look what we have here... *Calls Angie*
(Back)
Kris: What about... No, how could fire and water mix? (Brb...)
Kris: Alright... *Smiles the slightest bit as he takes her hand gently and apparates them home*
Kris: Hmm, water and earth... Mud? Really? That can't be the best I can think of...
Kris: Right... Want to go home, then?