Separate names with a comma.
(I think we should maybe stay in the sixth grade range for a couple of more pages for people that are new. ^^ to make friends and such.)
Phoebe: *Whips her tail, blinks, then looks down at her feet*
Phoebe: *Blinks, staring at Deric* ...
Phoebe: W-what? I wanna what? *Blinks*
Phoebe: *Shrugs, putting her hands in her pockets* N-Nervous..
(And it's Spanish. XD I'm not hispanic, but I went to a bilingual school that taught Spanish)
(It's señorita. XD) Phoebe: S-Spain.. *Whips her tail slightly, her cheeks tinted red*
Phoebe: E-Spain.. *Has a lisp on the s like normal Spaniards do* (Fact, when Spaniards speak, they have a lisp on the s.)
Phoebe: E-España... *Whipping her tail slightly*
() Phoebe: *Face turns slightly pink, shuffling off*
(Add to Phoebe: Afraid to like anyone because of rejection)
Phoebe: *Smiles, whipping her tail* Hi.
[img] 12 Phoebe Ruiza Playful, charming, stubborn, somewhat sweet. Hybrid with a girl and a wild cat.
Celeste~ I shrugged, sighing. "I have to go to work, I need to sleep." I sighed, shuffling to my room. I plopped on my bed, and fell asleep. I...
Glimmer: e.e
Phoebe: ^^ *Closes her eyes, playing*
Punctuation is your issue.
(D: It was scary as hell.)
(>.< IT SCARES ME-)
(There's four. e.e)