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(Yo KATIE!)
Cloud: You find me interesting? Why, when you're so much more so? *Leans over and kisses her*
(OPAL! )
(I think I said his hair was... )
(Katie was on, but maybe she's off now...) Cloud: Really? What kinds of things about me interest you so much?
(Cool. Just so that Cloud doesn't randomly appear next to Raven when your last post said she was alone or something like that )
(I was thinking... Since Cloud's really attached to Raven, why don't you control him when I'm not around?)
(Pie! ) Cloud: *Smiles at her* Something on your mind?
Ok, I just thought I might show you guys how the story looks now, before I edit it or change it, as well as showing what the story'll be like...
Didn't anybody notice my upda(n)te? UpDante? WHY AM I NEVER FUNNY EXCEPT WHEN I FAIL?!
Cloud: *Is with Raven*
(Bump)
With very long legs...
(Is that a word?)
(I'm surprised nobody mentioned QUARK! It's a real word )
()
Kris: *Wanders the school humming to "Rolling in the Deep"*
Nice
Hmmm, how 'bout I give you guys a sneak peek of my unedited hand-written version of the next 6-7 chapters? VOTE! Which chapter do you guys wanna...
Oh, now I got it. Ty