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Kirsten: "Well then. That's not weird."
Kirsten: She turns back to Mist, then jogs over. "What was that?"
Kirsten: "I'm gonna go wander around," she says blankly, doubting anybody would hear her. She stands up and heads to the right, avoiding cracks in...
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Kirsten: "I'd rather be cremated. I don't like the idea of my body rotting underground."
Kirsten: "I don't fear death." She strokes her chocolate brown hair with her small fingers.
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Kirsten: She shrugs her shoulders. "Even if we don't die here, we'll die anyway."
Kirsten: "Of course I'm not scared of Ghosts. You're just dead. And we will be, too, soon enough."
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Kirsten: She looks at Jesabelle, intrigued. "Hi."
Kirsten: "I don't know ..."
Kirsten: "Slightly ..."
Kirsten: She fiddles with her hair then looks at the ground. "I haven't had a decent life ..."
Kirsten: "That's not the spirit! Even if you think we are going to die, don't say it aloud."