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My noodles.
I'm a collection of pixels.
Anyways, back on topic ...
Undead? Wasn't that Charlie's old club that warred Immortals and practically every other club on PimD?
Join a club that wants to war, then war Dorris and Gnossos.Guaranteed win!
Good story. Only two things I would change: Paragraphing. A new line for a new speaker.
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Full stop needed at the end of the post. Capitals for your username. You've been Grammar Nazi'ed by Brooke!
I will slap my owner until she lets me declare a war!
I'm a quarter English, a quarter French, a quarter Dutch, and a quarter Welsh.
Another thread from Ambitious Alice the Noob!I do totally agree, my club used to war all the time, and now, they don't.
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