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Kirsten: She sits at the back of the classroom, confused and scared.
((Guys, I may be going soon - don't get too far without me!)).
Rose: She reads the ingredients, concentrating hard, and glancing at Rhyan often.
Rose: She finds her book and sits at a table by the window; she begins flipping through the pages to find a Sleeping Draught.
Rose: She punches him playfully, then returns to looking. ((What house is Rhyan in?)).
Kirsten: Bites her lip, but then realises that the teacher is too busy to notice Zeus.
Kirsten: Looks back at Zeus. "Only when it's like this."
Kirsten: Looks back at Arktum. "You're smart, right? What actually causes this weather?"
Rose: "Do you even know what I'm looking for?" She tries raising her left eyebrow, but it fails and makes her look like a weirdo.
Kirsten: Whips around. "It is pretty strange."
Rose: She smiles back then heads to the section marked 'Potions'. She starts scanning the shelves for a book entitled Magical Drafts and Potions...
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Rose: She giggles a little bit and holds open the castle door for Rhyan, then goes up the hallway slightly to the library. "You wanna sleep while...
Kirsten: She talks in a gentle whisper. "Pssst. Arktum. PSSSST!"
Rose: "I'm in sixth year, but the teachers say I'm ready for my NEWTs." She takes out a packet of Berty Bott's Every Flavour Beans and eats a...
Kirsten: She notices Arktum staring out the window and throws a piece of crumpled-up paper at his head.
Rose: She starts walking back up to the castle with Rhyan. "So, what year are you in?"
Kirsten: She outlines her flames in a fine-liner, then turns the page and starts to take notes on the class.
Rose: "I am sort of; I was just heading to the library, would you like to come? It's a good way to wind down, I'm sure Madam Pince wouldn't mind...
Rose: Looks puzzled. "Okay then ..."