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Lily: She looks up from her book. "Oh, hi,"
Update! ???????????????? I unzip the door of the tent and step outside. Shannon, Aishling and Liam sit in a circle on the ground, while Danny...
Could you please review my story, Lotus. I know it is very short, but I wanted to rather try a short story, seeing as my others are longer. Lotus...
Kirsten: She wanders slowly through the corridor, wandering about the Old Diary that she found.
Ahli, this is so sweet.I cried halfway through.Happy Anniversary, and I wish you have many mores happy years together.
Thanks, Shan.
Try and make the post longer, a bit of detail as well. For example, maybe describe the child and the surroundings.
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Lily: She goes to sit by the lake, with her copy of Magical Me by Gilderoy Lockhart.
Update! ???????????????? When I go to sleep that night, I am nestled in a tent with Shannon, Aishling, Liam and Danny. I am the last to fall...
I'm fine to start.
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Sorry the entire story was short; the one I'm working on now promises to be a lot better.Thank you all for your lovely feedback and I hope you...
Lotus In a time of torture, Lotus Bryce is accused of Witchcraft. Her only choice is to run: but where? Who can she trust? Join the amazing...
June 1646 Me and Richard have lived with Bertha for two years now. Every morning, Mrs Bersham buys the blankets I make. Then, I use that money to...
I thought you'd like that. Shannon's character I think will be developed a lot more than Aishling, Liam or Danny's, and you'll find out...
Spark Claire Wright thinks she is a normal girl, until she wakes up one day with a unexplainable burn on her leg. From that moment on, her life...
Update! ???????????????? The black mist is moving closer, but now I can see that it isn't mist. It is a line of cloaked people, all gliding over...
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