Separate names with a comma.
Mom: I dont know why don't you ask him -trys to shut the door- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bridget: -I hear gun shots, I walk towards the sound-
Mom: She made my husband kill him self
Mom: -opens the door- who are you? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bridget: -swims in circles-
-swims around nervous-
Just be careful -jumps into the lake-
Just ask her why she hates me
-looks up at you tears in my eyes- you will?
-continues to cry-
My mom
S-s-she hates me
-I slip into the lake and emerge a couple seconds later, I start to cry-
-I stand up and limp over to Alex, I'm covered in mud, my foot is bleeding and I have a bruise on my face- hi
-I start to run back to Alex, I step on something sharp (cause I don't wear shoes) I fall over into some mud.- today is not my day
-she opens the door- Hi mom I'm not your mom, I'm not the mom of a fish I just wanted to tell you that you were wrong, I found someone I like...
-runs into town and knocks on my moms door-
-shakes my head no and stands up- I'll be right back I need to take care of something
-feels a tear streak down my face-
Bump
-moves closer to Alex-
-looks up at the sky-