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I've just finished mine, who do I send it to again?
I know I am...
This is so totally amazing!As Sammi said on the first page, your grammar needs touching up a tad, but not much!?I love this story! Update!
The update is on it's way!?
Congrats Jopo! -HS_Brooke-Noodles 84KCS Jopo's Side
Bump!!
I'm not going to post of much now, other than the writing contest and my story. After I've finished my trilogy, I may leave FF.
10for my lovely
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Lily: She runs over to Rhyan. "Rhy, please, calm down." Tears start to form in her eyes. "You'll get hurt!"
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Lily: "Rhyan! Don't! Please! You know what she's like!" Scarlet: She chuckles again. "Expelliarmus!"
Lily: "RHYAN! No!" Scarlet: She chuckles. "Didn't mummy ever tell you stay out of people's business?"
Scarlet: She moves the head of the man she killed with her foot and tuts. "Dear, dear."
Lily: She trails behind him. Scarlet: She chuckles. "Avada Kedavra!"
Lily: She squeezes Rhyan's hand tight. "If she finds out that we left, we're dead, you know that?" Scarlet: She begins to attack an unsuspecting...
I'm a noodle-kind-of-gal.
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Amazing!