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Riku: *Flinches and looks back at Raven, unsure of which one is in control*
Lauryn: *Walks over and pushes the beds together*
(Fine, but I intended for it to mean Bad Raven's...)
Lauryn: *Looks at her, shocked, then smiles wide* Yes!
(I meant that the emblem was Evil Raven's...)
Lauryn: *Opens the door and looks inside* There's only two beds...
Lauryn: *Smiles happily* Yay!
Riku: No... I... I hate her... *Looks into her eyes*
Kris: *Waves back, smiling* Lauryn: *Arrives at the dorms* Ummm, this is my room... Where is yours? ()
Lauryn: *Gets up* Kris, I'll see you tomorrow, ok? *Looks at Ari* Let's go!
Riku: *Looks into Raven's eyes, emblem glowing* She means nothing to me... She's weak... I... I...
Lauryn: Shall we... Go to our dorms? *Blushes*
Riku: ... She means nothing.... *Stays still*
Riku: I love you... With all of my heart... *Keeps gazing into her eyes*
Riku: *Looks deeply into her eyes lovingly, and the words form on his tongue*
Lauryn: *Smacks Kris, smiling, and scoots closer to Ari*
Lauryn: *Blushes* Kris: *Smiles* Good for you, Lauryn!
Lauryn: R-really?
Riku: ... What do you want me to do, mistress?
Riku: I-I'm not... *Mental voice is silenced* (Now your... slave... In every way)