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don't kill me while I post these... RoxyxDirk JanexJake SolluxxKarkat KarkatxKanaya KanayaxGamzee GamzeexTavros EridanxFeferi KarkatxTerezi...
e.e So approved-
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D: NO-
Fuck yeah. Fuck, I had the shittiest time drawing that. D: I doubt you can see it, but I probably fixed the damn shoes a billion times. e.e Fuck...
Godamn you Adam, you may have one this time-*Rolls away*
"just a kiss hony? *honey." Jesus. Damn you confusing-
I've been here since May of 2011.
I have the shittiest drawing skills, therefore, crossover?- "Ho hell. *oh. Dirk, come hur. *here." "no, youre drunk." [img]
Yeah, neither can I. "INSUFFERABLE PRI-" "FLIGHTY BROAD." Nannaquin's scaring me.
D: Omg. e.e Eh, seems legit. They fit each other well with best bros.
Omg, I want to show Ashton this now-
Damnit. D:
Q: HEY KARKAT. DID YOU EVER REALIZE YOUR BLOOD IS THE SAME COLOR AS HUMAN BLOOD? "MAYBE IT HAS TO DO WITH THE FUCKING FACT OF THAT I AM THE GOD...
:0 GODAMN-
It's okay, sorry I was procrastinating.
.-. A.) Adam's been here for less than I have been, but you should take criticism because it ups your writing.
This might be a confusing part of the story, since chapters five and four are in the same update) Chapter Four, Swamp Brawl Area: Swamplands....
1.) Try not to use faces in your writing, it kind of brings that down, just slightly. 2.) Only a few punctuation errors, such as too many...