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Kris: *Sobs as he sees Lauryn breathing again* Oh, God! Lauryn: *Weakly opens her eyes, seeing Ari* Hello, love...
(Hm, what about a short part where Good Raven watches, helpless, through Evil Raven at what is going on?)
Lauryn: *Twitches as a spark jumps between them as Ari kisses her, and she gasps*
Kris: Ari, she's still alive... She has to be... *Tears up*
(ITS RAPING TIME )
Lauryn: *A finger twitches*
Kris: *Runs into the room* Oh, God, LAURYN! Lauryn: *No reaction* Kris: Oh, God... *Kneels next to her* Please wake up...
Riku: *Nods* As you wish...
Kris: *Looks frantically at Chayse* I'm sorry! *Sprints after Ari*
Riku: *Follows her lead, allowing her to pin him* Your orders, Mistress?
Kris: *Sees Ari carrying Lauryn* What?! Lauryn! Oh God, what happened?!
Lauryn: *Coughs up water, still not breathing*
Riku: *Kisses her back, fully under her control, the emblems on both his neck and wrist ebony black*
Lauryn: *Not breathing*
Kris: Tell me, please... I want to know... Lauryn: *Unconscious, breathes out the last of her air*
Riku: N-no... I... Not you... *Closes his eyes, brow furrowing, and then all of his tension disappears, and he opens his eyes, now gazing lovingly...
Kris: Chayse, are you really ok? Did something happen..?
Lauryn: *Closes her eyes, falling unconscious*
Riku: *Shivers, his control weakening* Don't... No, I... I belong to Raven.....
Lauryn: *Cries mentally as she realizes she can't get away, thinking:* Ari... I'm sorry I won't see you again...