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Riku: *Is depressed*
Riku: *Kisses her gently, wiping away her tears* It'll work out somehow...
Lauryn: *Smiles softly, and lays a hand gently on her cheek*
Riku: *Looks at Raven sadly* I wish I could fight against her...
Lauryn: *Looks sad and hugs Ari* Don't cry, please... Kris: *Stands up* I'll let the two of you have some private time... See you later. *Leaves*
Riku: *Looks away* I'm sorry...
Lauryn: Well... I was satisfied... I got to meet you... I would've died happy, but now I get to live happy, too! *Smiles reassuringly*
Riku: I know... But I think... I think she's done something else to me... I think... There may be another me, inside of me, just like she's in...
Lauryn: *Looks a bit scared* Yes! Did something happen to me after I passed out?!
Riku: *Looks into Raven's eyes* I... *Sighs, looking ashamed*
Lauryn: *Looks confused* Yes, why?
(Yes, Timeskip™) *Timeskip* Riku: *Opens his eyes*
Kris: Yeah... One of the merpeople, in any case...
Riku: N-nothing... My more... honorable side appears to be resisting... He will no longer bother us... (Riku is more like Raven now!)
Lauryn: *Nods*
Lauryn: A... A merman, I think...
Lauryn: *Eyes widen as she suddenly remembers* The... The lake?!
Riku: ... That is irrelevant... *An eyelid twitches as he tries to resist and fails, becoming trapped in his own mind, forced to watch*
Lauryn: *Hugs her weakly* Is... Is something wrong..?
Riku: *Sees Good Raven in Evil Raven's eyes, but can't fight against her control* I am yours to command...